Today education play more crucial role in the society. Parents encourage their children to educate and study more efficiently in order to follow their future career. I agree with the statement which parents are doing more attention to their children education than they do in the years before. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, modern family get smaller than before. They get fewer kids also, it has positive effects. In small family parents have more additional time to give their children more attention.my own experience is a compelling example of this, when I was an intelligent children which lived in a large family, I always need my parents attention in order to help me in my study and encourage me to continue my study in university but as I have first mentioned my two younger sister and two older brother involved my parents and they couldn’t spend even time for every one us.
Secondly, parents today have more access to follow the teachers. They have regular meeting frequently which attended. They expose to their teachers way of education.for instance, I remember that fewer years ago when I studied university my friends have a kid which study in high school so she has always been worried about her douters study and most of the time she was in her school and ask her teachers about her study. Most of the time she help her because she wanted to encourage her girl to continues her educate.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that today, modern family are envolve whit their childrens education. This is because they get smaller family whit additional time and have access to their teachers.
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- TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'child'?
Suggestion: child
...mple of this, when I was an intelligent children which lived in a large family, I always...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'brother' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'brethren', 'brothers'.
Suggestion: brethren; brothers
...ned my two younger sister and two older brother involved my parents and they couldn&apo...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the teachers. They have regular meeting frequently which attended. They expose t...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...s about her study. Most of the time she help her because she wanted to encourage her...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83972125436 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52966951692 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494773519164 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.665408987 48.9658058833 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242294032229 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102933666821 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115681193372 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164714463664 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127219113644 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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