Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The reading and the listening argues about how the memory of Chevalior were accurate. The idea of reading and the listening are contradicted to each other. there are three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, the reading states that the chevalier borrow money from merchant. However, the professor states that he spends much more money and when he got into lack of money he had to sele something from his assesses which is normally take time to see therefor he had to borrowed money from merchant.
Second, the reading point out that the memory of chevalier is not true because it was wroted many years after the conversation occurred. On the other hand, the speaker claims that the memoir was wroted exactly after he narrow his memory every night.
Third, the reading mentions the story of him when he was in prison and he had number of well-conected who could help him to get away from prison. However, the professor dis agrees and states that other prison also had few friends but non-of them were escaped.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...a pivotal role in business environment. one of the popular place which advertisment...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...advertisment are not useful for kids. however others assume that short comercial coul...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...advertisment are not useful for kids. however others assume that short comercial coul...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...sion will make childrens braine active. when kids are watching advertising directly ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hear'
Suggestion: hear
...g directly from the television they can heard and see amazing and attractive shows wh...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... it was alittle bit difficault because \i had a fuultime job and I had not have e...
^
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...use \i had a fuultime job and I had not have enough time to spent with my child. Dur...
^^^^
Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...ealy atracted by the advertising shows. its not only was benefit for her to be sile...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Research
...llowing the sing and the story of them. research shows individuals will active their mem...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a poster' or simply 'posters'?
Suggestion: a poster; posters
...n television rather just seeing them in a posters or bilboard. If advertises desinge in a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 391, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t seeing them in a posters or bilboard. If advertises desinge in a good manner chi...
^^
Line 4, column 527, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
... statics shows that children would have find a chance to learn new songs which help ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...ion have some positive impact for kids. its not only make chhildren to learn langua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89769820972 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65832880168 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501278772379 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2293978522 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145196033747 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557150786945 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381002666002 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919088853956 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315253939868 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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