The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Agree or disagree.
Living in a chaotic environment and making a decision under the uncertainty are most important pillars in society in today's world. Although the new devices and access to the last updated technologies are making our life easier, however, it has negative influences on our mental and body health. These effects can increase our tension and stress. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone or otherwise there are other ways than can help us to reduce stress without leaving the people. Some people possess that the former is more agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege the latter is more auspicious. I personally, content this issue is multifaceted. I think spending time alone has some benefits and disadvantages and by weighted both sides, I think its benefits are more than its disadvantages. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding points.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is spending time alone helps us to analyze and review our circumstances and decision that are made and affected our lives. We can clearly destination which decisions can affect our happiness and what procedures we should do to improve our mental health. Consider my personal experience to make this point clear. When I felt stressed I prefer to spend time alone and deliberate on what can I do to remove my tensions. I think all stressful situations can be handled if we consider the point behind them.
The second rationale behind this issue is rooted in the fact that by spending time alone we can do some activities and actions that can help us to reduce the tension. For example, I prefer to do some outdoor activities, like climbing and going to a campaign. These activities have positive influences. For example, we can connect with nature and relax in it.
To brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I agree with this statement that spending time alone can help us to reduce stress.
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- TPO 43 Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wait un 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96581196581 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77713339008 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535612535613 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4669207957 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290281473819 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819701293439 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123225773415 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196370722524 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819069212019 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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