Big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
A big salary is much more imporatnt than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree with the follopwing statement. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of opinion on how crucial it is to have enough money. Everybody works for the sake of earning big sum. Having said that does money really can buy happiness? This is something paradoxical. No one have the answer of this question. In the given scenario, it is perceived that whether earning big money or having satisfactory job is imperative for person. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly, in this modern it is essential to yearn enough money however having the inner satisfaction is more vital rather than getting paid a big sum. I feel this wway for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraph.
To start with, nothing can be achieved if a person is not dedicated and focused on their work. To be more precise, in order to invest our precious time fully on our work, it is significant that we are doing it by our heart and this is only possible if we are satisfied with whatever we are indulging in. In addtion, money has nothing to do with our satisfaction. I have wittnessed this in my own personal life. Back then, when I used to work for a certain company, I used to get paid a huge sum nevertheless I was not happy with my work since the working ambiance was not good enough. There was so much unnecessary pressure over employee. Therefore, it is not just the money that brings happiness in people’s life but a satisfaction indeed.
Secondly, satisfaction makes our life a lot more easier to live. To be more clear, if we are actually satisfied with our deeds then automatically we sense the inner peace. In additon, everything seems beautiful and we can have quality life with the people closed to us. Drawing from my own life experience. When I was working for a cooperative society, I had a minimal salary but the working surroung was so sound and peace which means no distraction, no pressure and so on. Likewise, I loved to go to work more than I liked to stay home. Therefore, life is meant to be live happiliy and most importantly money should not come in between to block the happiness.
The above statement sounds reasonable however the value of money especially in this modern world cannot be taken for granted. Surely, money can save us from many future uncertainties and not only this we can have lavish lifestyle. As we know, nobody knows what the future holds. Thus, we need to live in our present happily and without any stress and one need to remember today’s future is tomorrow’s present.
All things considered, despite the fact that money is precious real happiness cannot be bought by it. It is the inner satisfaction that makes the person truely happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it is perceived that whether earning big money or having satisfactory job is impe...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ndly, satisfaction makes our life a lot more easier to live. To be more clear, if we are ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, i feel, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69153225806 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71226759723 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3336764499 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.064516129 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29032258065 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194392158141 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566526043278 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101583304684 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155903980426 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.235774747922 0.0645574589148 365% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.