Indeed, it will consider as a brilliant act that businesses hire employees for their entire life because their life might be assured and they may have the ability to handle the life better but actually it is not possible at all, I can prove my claim by several reasons.
Firstly, there is a common quotation" every business just think about the benefit" it means it's the free market system and every businessman is allowed to deal according to the interest so in this cause majority of the businesses prefer to do not hire employees for the entire life and don't west the money instead they are going to use from machines that are inventing nowadays.
Secondly, each sort of the businesses can be in danger of collapsing either in reason of government politics or for the cause of the changes that happen in the world market so it considers the point to do not hire employees for throughout of their life because, on the other hand, the existence of the risk is part of the business.
In conclusion, I believe that except of some big private banks and companies the small or medium businesses are not able to
hire employees for the entire life.
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 60
- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 70
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 70
- What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. 60
- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... think about the benefit' it means its the free market system and every busine...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... hire employees for the entire life and dont west the money instead they are going t...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all or medium businesses are not able to hire employees for the entire life. ...
^^^
Line 8, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hire employees for the entire life.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1977.66487455 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73039215686 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61301179524 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.1344086022 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1676155062 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 241.25 100.406767564 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.6045352989 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.75 5.45110844103 472% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199868758467 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123619127024 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168490629557 0.0737576698707 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12154906363 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589928549606 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 11.7677419355 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 58.1214874552 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.0537634409 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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