Cars
In 2022, the world is in the midst of an energy crisis, because of the scarcity of resources, many believe that in the next twenty years, there will be fewer and fewer cars in the world. But I don't think so. Actually, the future of cars is determined by the need on the market. No decrease of the need for cars means no decrease in the number of cars.
From the point of view of the whole world, the demand for cars is far from saturation. There are 7.7 billion people, and developed countries have a mere billion people. Developing countries have the most people. Although it's true that the developed countries may not need cars anymore, but the remaining six- seventh of the world still have a large need for cars. So, the car factories will only produce more cars than today to fulfill the needs of people. Twenty years ago, a hundred people in China had less than 0.5 cars. Now, every 5 people share a car. We can imagine other developing countries' demand for cars will only become bigger.
From the point of view of a nation, the growth of the economy has everything to do with the car industry. In many industrialized countries, like Germany, Japan, and China, automobile manufacturing accounts for a large part of their industrial output, and the car industry creates a lot of careers. If there are no new industries to replace the car industry, then the country will be a mess, almost all industries will feel the blow to them, the chance of losing a career will be high, and it will shake the very foundations of the country.
Actually, the car industry will not suffer from this energy crisis. It is true that oil is not a renewable resource, but if the research on renewable resources may have important success, it can replace oil to become a trustworthy resource. Many countries produce large amounts of electric cars because of this reason. So, the change in cars would only be energy and not in number.
To sum up, cars are very hard to replace, both in economy and demand. Also, the use of renewable resources will not influence the development of the car. So, in twenty years, there will be more and more cars in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ewer and fewer cars in the world. But I dont think so. Actually, the future of cars ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, still, then, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5829015544 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4431315524 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466321243523 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0010706132 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4090909091 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449990918447 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175204711832 0.076458572812 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113438308484 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302142001083 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540960602474 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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