In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Do you agree or disagree with the above statement.
Many people have different opinions regarding this statement. In my opinion, I agree that in the future there would be fewer cars than they are in the present. I feel this way for two reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, we have limited renewable resources in the world that is being used up and has hiked the prices of diesel and petrol. The ordinary people cannot afford the high prices. Obviously, they will shift to alternatives of the automobiles. This is best demonstrated by my personal experience. Recently, the price of petrol increased and reached 100 rupees per liter. I have to attend my classes regularly and 75 percent of my pocket money is being spent on this. As a result, I decided to use the public transportation that costs 20 rupees daily to reach classes than to take my scooter. Additionally, in the future their will be more crisis of renewable energy that will eventually lead to a smaller number of automobiles.
Second, climate change is a burning issue in the world and concerns related to environment protection are increasing. Automobiles are one of the reasons, as it emits the harmful gases in surrounding, for the increasing pollution. Evidently, decrease in the rate of car use would lead to dampen the toxic gases in environment. For instance, the city I reside is very much polluted and the government decided to use the even-odd system of transportation system to reduce the pollution. In the future the condition is going to be more severe, that will definitely lead to the decrease use of cars and other vehicles.
In conclusion, in future there will be less use of vehicles because of increased prices of petrol and diesel and because people will be concerned about their environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87248322148 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92036551662 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.897007615 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4117647059 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208943855515 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624310373463 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640429291089 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133580285607 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250251871214 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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