Right to vote in democratic country means a big responsiblity on the shoulder of the voter. It is not an easy task and requires understanding to whom one should vote. I do not agree that children above the age of 15 should be allowed to vote. There are some reasons to it which I would like to explore in the essay.
First, children over the age of 15 are not discerned that they can take such big decisions on their own. They can be get influenced easily. They can be easily lured by the leaders to give votes if the leaders are making false promises in their interest. The children of such age group have fickle decisions. One day they are planning to give vote to one person, another day their choice might change due to some childish reason. Giving voting rights to this age group of children can prove detrimental for the society.
Secondly, the children of this age can be manipulated by the parents. Parents can make them to vote to the leader of their interest. The leader can make promises through speeches if they get to know this type of voting pattern. So that they can get votes of the whole family. This does not represent true democracy. Ultimately, the society will suffer.
Lastly,the childern of this age have their own adolscent problems to look into. They are not ready to take such critical decision. They are in the changing phase in between kids and adults. So they should be given their own space to sort out their problems rather then loading them with big responsibilities like voting.
In conclusion, the children above the age of 15 should not be allowed to vote. As they are not cognizant enough to give vote and decide the future of the country. Their mind are fragile, as they can be easily manipulated and influenced. After all, the countries all over the world have not given this right to vote due to some good reasons. Thus, this decision of all should be respected and children should not be given right to vote.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...et to know this type of voting pattern. So that they can get votes of the whole family....
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Suggestion: , the
...ely, the society will suffer. Lastly,the childern of this age have their own ado...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...space to sort out their problems rather then loading them with big responsibilities ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58689458689 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42444283678 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458689458689 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4558441227 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.4 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.04 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432033868141 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139705261704 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179817263872 0.0737576698707 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277715195309 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154717530154 0.0645574589148 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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