Choising place for living is crucial thing during our live, hower some indivituals prefer to live in one city,others think moving from place to place is more beneficial. In my opinion I prefer to live in one era instead of changing my place with time. In the followeing essay I will explain my point of view by elaborating to a coupl reason with example from my own life.
To begin with, spenging our live in one place is quit convinence to me, this is maily due to the fact that living in same place unable me to build a stronge all life friendship especialy with our neibour, this relationship is important, since these people help andsupport us, for instance, we have been live in our city for a long time, therefore, we have neighbor which look same us our family, when I had sick before three years ago, my neibour support me, they did their best to help me to overcome my illness, takecare form our family, so I extremely appreciat to my friends, this example explain my thought about my decission for living in the same town.
Furthermore, moving from place to place is detrimental to my, to illustrate this concept, my cousin moved from her town to another place, my cousin faced many problems in her recent place like change her son school, that make him to fell sad since he missed his friend, moreover, in addilion she need to seek for another job to support her family, especialy she moves to forgen area and no one know them to help. moreover, she is not familiar with places which are perfect for shoping. instead living in the same location is very helpfull and easier for her.
In a nut shell, for all the benefecial things that I had mentioned, in addition to detrimental thigs that explained in the previous paragraphs, I definitly believe that stay in the one region all live is better than moving between cities.
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Choising place for living is crucial thing during our live, hower some indivituals prefer to live in one city,others think moving from place to place is more beneficial. In my opinion I prefer to live in one era instead of changing my place with time. In the followeing essay I will explain my point of view by elaborating to a coupl reason with example from my own life.
To begin with, spenging our live in one place is quit convinence to me, this is maily due to the fact that living in same place unable me to build a stronge all life friendship especialy with our neibour, this relationship is important, since these people help andsupport us, for instance, we have been live in our city for a long time, therefore, we have neighbor which look same us our family, when I had sick before three years ago, my neibour support me, they did their best to help me to overcome my illness, takecare form our family, so I extremely appreciat to my friends, this example explain my thought about my decission for living in the same town.
Furthermore, moving from place to place is detrimental to my, to illustrate this concept, my cousin moved from her town to another place, my cousin faced many problems in her recent place like change her son school, that make him to fell sad since he missed his friend, moreover, in addilion she need to seek for another job to support her family, especialy she moves to forgen area and no one know them to help. moreover, she is not familiar with places which are perfect for shoping. instead living in the same location is very helpfull and easier for her.
In a nut shell, for all the benefecial things that I had mentioned, in addition to detrimental thigs that explained in the previous paragraphs, I definitly believe that stay in the one region all live is better than moving between cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59574468085 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47265299948 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.378118977 48.9658058833 399% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.0 100.406767564 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.125 20.6045352989 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 5.45110844103 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.603534273825 0.236089414692 256% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.304618695337 0.076458572812 398% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.234712862974 0.0737576698707 318% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37712696117 0.150856017488 250% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.249091128837 0.0645574589148 386% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 11.7677419355 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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