A glance at people attitude toward transportation vehicles brings to light a question that has provoked discussions several times, that is, which one serves more to human beings. In the past decades, technology improved our lives dramatically and made a lot of things possible for us. Each of them has specific role in the modern life that we cannot ignore it. In my point of view, automobiles have changed the world more than the rest.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that car is an essential part of routine life. Most people drive their own car to buy groceries, go to work, see their families. As a matter of fact, without cars we could never build big cities. A person may drive 13 kilometers to reach his destination and without car job opportunities were limited to near distances. Thus, car is necessary nowadays.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that we use automobiles not only for regular transportation, but also for extra important issues. For example, if we want to send a patient to hospital we cannot be successful without ambulance. Firemen use their specific cars to save a lot of people and rescue who are surrounded in fire. More than one century ago, people died in fire because there was not any one to help them. Therefore, automobiles are very necessary for saving people.
Admittedly, airplanes is definitely important todays. People travel to far distances and between continents by airplanes. For instance, I came to USA four years ago from my country which is really far and without flight, it seems impossible. However, I still believe that car has changed life more. Although traveling between America and USA is very hard but still doable with ships. On the other hand, all people cannot afford the price of airplanes and it is for rich people. So, we have to admit that car effects on our lives are very important.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, world has been changed by car more than other kinds of transportation vehicle. It is used in regular daily tasks and save people lives in many ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ople died in fire because there was not any one to help them. Therefore, automobiles ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6877317348 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8686442918 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9130434783 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9130434783 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123903769105 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334967708331 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033096108344 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070494319473 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272086557888 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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