An individual goes through many phases in his/her life like and experiences many kinds of feeling. The first is the schooling phase. In school he/she spends almost ten years of his life.He/she gets introduced to new people, but at that age a person doesn't have that level of understanding the only part is his/her life is to study and get good grades. But after the school comes the most amazing phase of an individual life that is the college phase. I believe that the college years are the best times in a person's life.
When a child comes to college after school, his life is totally changes. He/she experiences many changes in their life. For example, In college there is no fixed uniform to wear, students can wear the clothes of their own choice. When a person enters the college years he/she makes new friends. Many students bunk the lectures and go to various places to visit. For example, when I was in college I had bunked a lecture and went for a movie with my friends. It was the first time I would have bunked a lecture and went out. There are many things that a person experiences for the first time in his life.
On the top , there are no responsibilities to be handled in college life, a person has total freedom to enjoy his/her life. Also it is said that the friends made in the college years are the true friends. They are the one who genuinely cares about us. There are many trips taken from the college which is the best part of the college years. For example, St. Francis college of engineering took their students to Manali. I have been the student of this college and also had the experience of going trip with friends from college.It is a different level of happiness which one experiences.
Yes the students also have to study while enjoying in college. They have to maintain a balance of study and fun. College years are the years in which the person lives truly lives his life without any stress and is always happy and calm. Also there are many activities conducted in college which are really interesting and they are one which a person remember's for his/her entire life.
In conclusion, I feel that college life includes no stress, no responsibility only studies and enjoyment. A person makes true friendship in the college years and also experiences heat break and many other life experiences a person gets from the college years. That's why college years are the best time in a person's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64203233256 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43847176215 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415704387991 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1216890259 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3076923077 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6538461538 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243675347157 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898044213318 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911324053604 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167802774067 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457474655321 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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