A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Our community plays a very crucial role in our daily lives. That is where we live and spend a great amount of our time there. If a large factory was going to be built near our community, there would be some advantages and some disadvantages to this addition which I am going to discuss. Some people may disagree with this addition, others would agree. In my view, in spite of all disadvantages that we may face, this addition is beneficial and I strongly support it for two main reasons.
A new factory built in every community may cause air pollution and have a bad effect on people's health by discharging some air-contaminant gases to the atmosphere. This new factory would also create some traffic problems in the neighborhood. For instance, 10 years ago, when I was living in Tehran with my family and grandparents, a new car factory was built by government to expand the industry of a specific car. My grandfather was suffering from a heart disease in that time. After the addition, his general health condition deteriorated and when we visited a doctor to ask for the reasons of the aggravation, he stated that the increased pollution in the city and heightened amount of greenhouse gases in the air is the cause of this problem. We also came across some more traffic jams every day and more of our daily time was wasted. This experience taught me that adding a new factory may bring some drawbacks that have to be considered.
Considering the benefits that a new factory would provide, the condition of the community after the addition may not be as bad as we thought. Above all, a new factory added to any city, will create jobs and provide more tax revenue for the city. As you know every structural process will require its own special designers and engineers in order to be accomplished. Enhanced amount of jobs will also raise the tax income which would benefit the city. For example, in the same time that I mentioned, couple friends of mine and some of my previous classmates were hired during both structural and operational process of factory. On the other hand any defects in city facilities drew the authorities' attention sooner than ever in order to be taken care of, all because more budget was available for the city due to increased tax income. As you can see, there are some beneficial points that come after creation of a new factory in a community which are the main reasons of my support,
To sum up, even though after adding a new factory, the community may resent some problems such as pollution and traffic, but the benefits that follow this addition such as new jobs and more tax revenue outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore I advise every community to embrace such an opportunity and take advantage of the good points.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 685, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authorities'' or 'authority's'?
Suggestion: authorities'; authority's
...any defects in city facilities drew the authorities attention sooner than ever in order to ...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tax revenue outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore I advise every community to embrace suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, you know, in my view, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72614107884 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68273226252 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47510373444 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1015401921 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.9 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141854841194 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463938929714 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518669281575 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913436123609 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319239694477 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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