Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to the future generations?
"Future belongs to the people who create it, not to those who follow behind it." said Hegel, one of a brilliant mind throughout the history of philosophy. Like he said, there is no doubt that the history makes its progress to the better future. The question, however, is that whether to agree or disagree with this thought has sparked spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent, agree with the statement that the way of life that our generation shares should be more satisfying to our future generation. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed some lights on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned here firstly is that we have less of an absolute poverty rate than before. Though the relative poverty rates are increasing due to the extension usage on the concept of poverty, it is crystal clear that only a few people are actually suffering from what we call starvation. This situation is quite different from our previous generation, whom they often experienced the lack of food to consume.
Another point to be mentioned as a second reason is that people nowadays have more respect to art and culture. I treat art as an essential component of my life, sometimes even more importantly than my financial stability. However, it was obvious to my parents' generation that people had their priority on basic living conditions. This is due to the fact that they generally had less chance of learning about art, music, culture and secondary language. However, various media made people able to access to many contents, which is the reason why we are more literate and affectionate toward cultural aspect.
Although the aforementioned points cross the mind at the first glance, it does not mean that they are the only one. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. It should be noted that the rights of woman in my parents' generation were much worse than now. Although women get paid around 67% of what man gets with the same amount of job right now, it used to be much lower in the 80's. Also, the cognizance about the social acting of women was very conservative in that era. It is distinct fact that more and more people are getting aware of the equality issues.
To make a long story short from the above mentioned points and reasons, one can safely draw a conclusion that the contemporary way of life is much helpful and satisfying for our future generation than that of the previous generation's way of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79633867277 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58116266511 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560640732265 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1769523483 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.85 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198349731262 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534283898067 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773960520905 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116079747655 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797655388772 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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