Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations? Use specific reasons and examples to support opinions.
There is tremendous change in everyday's life because of technology. Day to day life of the people is changing every day. Every generation tries to improve their life. According to me our way of life would be more satisfying to generation compare to way of life of our parents. There are several reasons for it.
First, our parents are not ever of new technology or they are not interested in new technology. They always try to follow the tradition and old methods of doing things. But, our generation always try to learn new technology and adopt new things easily. It is better because it enhances our skills. We have to accept new things to support our growth. If stop adopting new things than growth will be stagnatize. Consider case of my home, my father always pays bill at the bill center but I always prefer to pays bill via online payment. Accoding to him paying bill at the bill center is more truthful and secure.
Second, our parents don't want to leave thier for work or to migrate from one city to another. They always want to stay in one city whole life. But , our generation is always ready to accept challenges and always ready to move to the new city for work except there is any financial problem or family problem. My parents thinks that study in different country is not a good idea. I should study in india so that they can meet me anytime. But I think if go to some othe countries it always helps to improve my skills. I will meet new people of totally diffrent culture and learn from them. So it is better to study somewhere else so that you can know the tradition of other country. You can represent your country or implement some things in own country by learning from them.
Finally, they believe that we should always study all the time and we should never focus on other activities. According to them study has highest priority and person can never achieve their dreams or earn more money unless he/she is not well educated, But our generation also focuses on othe activities. There are so many celebritied who had left their study to follow achieve dreams and becomes successful. We should focus on other skills and parents should not focus on thier child's study only. But try to improve other skills also. Su in future he/she can choose other path also and be successful person.
To conclude, our way of life is far better than them because we are broad minded, always ready to accept new things and always ready to accept change. Because of these reasons our contry can grow better and became successful in every field and develop new technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61605206074 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32674217051 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449023861171 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1606721623 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9333333333 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3666666667 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156582582186 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434254521805 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754103780568 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103983386248 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110167654453 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.