The way of life between generations has always been changing. This dissimilarities result from developments in different parts of our lives. There is a big gap between the way of my life and that of my parents. I am inclined to believe that my way of life would be more satisfying for the next generations. I am going to explain why it would be more satisfying for them by comparing my parents' time and ours.
To begin with, technology plays a key role in our lives. It has an influence on every field such as communication, transportation etc. and has facilitated our lives considerably. Today's communication is faster than before and in the future, it will be faster than it is today. Next generation will be fond of speed and it is my opinion that a faster life will be more convenient for them. For example, in order to communicate, my parents would use the post system and had to wait for a long time to get a post. Today, I use different sort of communication tools such as messenger, social media apps or cell phone and am able to do these instantly and everywhere.
Another difference between our way of lives is the way of education. In their time, education was not obligatory and common. The literacy rate was lower than it is today and most of their generation graduated from primary school. When they wanted to learn something, they had to use printed books or encyclopedias and they were less aware of their surroundings due to limited communication opportunities. They would just use newspaper and watch tv to learn what was happening in the world. But today, the way of education has changed rapidly. Even though most of us go to school for education, we tend to learn through internet by attending online courses or watching videos on the internet. To my way of thinking, online education will be more common because they will be more accustomed to these facilities.
Last but not least, transportation has improved readily in a few decades. Today's vehicles are faster and transportation prices are lesser than before. Therefore, we can travel around the world in a short period of time without much cost. We can also book a ticket in a few minutes whenever we want by using the internet. But in my parents' time, they were incapable of doing these because they did not have opportunities like today. It is needless to say that future transportation will be faster and advanced.
In conclusion, the way of life always differed between generations and it will be the same in the future. Both the previous and next generations are unlike our generation. But there is no doubt in my mind that the next generations would be more satisfying with our way of life rather than my parents' because of faster, more technological and comfortable life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7468879668 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91559553128 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47510373444 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2041776788 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8965517241 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6206896552 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41379310345 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.88709677419 368% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270053662631 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771633443283 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939071134295 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179630897462 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120993071026 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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