Generation gap is present in two immediate generation like parents and children from hundreds of years. I think my way of life is more satisfying to future generation then my parent's way of life. I think that because of several reasons which mentioned below.
Now a days technologies are growing at great pace. If we are not moving with technology we are not survive in this competitive and information world. Now a days mobile phones and laptops are part of our life. We can use mobile phones for calls, video chat despite the other person living on other side of earth with help of internet in fraction of seconds. Our parent's generation depended upon postman and it took time how far the other person was. Through Television we see any incident happened through news. Because of netflix and amazon videos we see all contents which made by different countries in English or our language.
Now a days travel become so easy, we books hotels, cabs, meals through mobile-apps in any place by just sitting from your home. Currently, Internet is big market store where all things are available for all world's people. It is possible by different sites like amazon, flipkart, alibaba which sell all things globally which in previous generation made & purchase by one small people-group of country. For instance, best tea of Assam (India) now available in Europe also. Because of cars & great roads we easily go one place to other place more efficacious with less effort in minimal time. Through aeroplanes we go foreign countries for visit or business purpose in less time then before required in ships. Now a days, through social media we knows large group of opinion which previously not possible. We are easily connected with local people which we never meet them before through social media, exchange and understand cultural and behavioural habits from them. Now a days for selling not require infrastructure, but needs just internet. They can make good business site and sell things online. Education is also becomes vast and globally. Students listen famous lecturer’s lecture in Youtube or internet site just sitting in his/her home. Through various apps they give various tests and study according them provides good practise before exam.
Even though technology makes our life easier and helpful, but there are some disadvantages also. People generally prefer to look at phone and not talk people who sit across them. Because of machines and technology more and more people become jobless.
All things have both positive and negative side. In my opinion, positive side are more than negative side in that matter. If we use technology better and effective way it makes our life better.
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- Some people think that we learn our most important lessons in school. Others think that the knowledge we acquire outside of school is the most important. Which view do you agree with ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, then, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02908277405 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52862933222 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5548098434 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.069522846 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5172413793 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4137931034 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58620689655 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146084461375 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382373969863 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714697587591 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101287760651 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774072306879 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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