The consumption of the world’s resources (oil and water, etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?
This day, in every part of the world, the demand for using energy resources has been growing by vigorous economic countries. The main reason for the extreme consumption is stemmed from papulation, which needs vital elements to satisfy humanity’s demands. From economic and environmental issues, This fact has a vast number of problems. This essay attends to describe the problem and solution for high rating consumptions of these vital resources.
In the first step, it seems that the economy of a few countries is depended on energy sources. Primarily, in the middle east, the principle of trade, export, and import between countries has been based on oil resources. Besides, rich countries, which are considered as primary resources of energy, are to be a modern country in the middle east. However, some political issues impose on this country to export their products at a low level of cost of the international price. Suddenly, the financial situation has increased under the increasing consumption of energy. The best way to solve this kind of problem is that the firm policy of the distinguishing economy of depending on energy is passing by authorizes. In Saudi Arabia, for instance, many investors around the world are invited to Saudi Arabia to invest in big digital marketing in the context of the internet. The statistics have shown that the benefit of this economic cooperation is around 100 Billion dollars per 1 year. So, it is respective to consider other financial resources for increasing the economy.
Additionally, from environmental issues, the use of fossil resources can be dangerous for the ocean and atmosphere. besides, it can be asked that how humankind can fill the gap of energy for the next generation of humanity in the next decades? To address these problems, it should be clear that increasing the population around the world force the government to develop its industry. The way of explanation, the transportation industry needs fossil energy resources to move the Airplane and cars. Furthermore, some nuclear energy should be supported by a massive amount of water resources to cool the facilities. Nevertheless, this setback can be solved by renewable energy resources like wind power of solar energy. The majority of this energy, which is not dangerous for the environment are very cheap to recover quickly. Inconsequent, prominent energy is available everywhere, which should be considered for investing in the developing industry.
In conclusion, humankind’s demands have increased in the last century by increasing the population and dividing countries in two-part as developing countries and developed countries which need to use the prominent power supply of energy. This development has two aspects of the economy and environmental issues. Renewable energy sources must be counted as the main supply for around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... consumptions of these vital resources. In the first step, it seems that the eco...
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...dangerous for the ocean and atmosphere. besides, it can be asked that how humankind can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96505177187 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6099635422 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161975853717 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469967929224 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427440823243 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962871548331 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231567590814 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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