Many people have very special object in their life such as a ring, a neckless, a letter or else and I find those people very lucky for that. Thankfully, I also have such an object which have a very significant and private place in my world. It is a simple paper cup. Maybe some people might find it strange however, it has a strong meaning to me and I would like to give an explanation about it.
Initially, I would like to start with the time that I was studying abroad. Of course, the idea of living alone was good at first but, when I started to keep up with different cultures and get use to the feeling of being apart from my family and loved ones were really hard to carry. My mother told me to be strong and to use this amazing chance wisely so, I concentrated on my work. Also, I learned about the daily routine of the place I lived and made friends in time. One of those friends started to be more special than everyone else because he was sharing the same situation with me and I felt closer to him because of that. After a moment, we started to take the same classes and spent the days together. I was constantly offering to go to the same coffee shop since I am a huge coffee addict whereas he was not. We usually got our coffees in those paper cups and take a walk.
Next, it has became our everyday routine and made us even closer. Those coffee talks were the sweetest and most fun things and we wanted to make it better so that we started to write nick names or draw some cute things on those cups. In time we both got better at drawing and writing hence, it became like a competition between us. Those comic writings and caricatures turned into little love notes and romantic figures. However, we never kept them.
We were get on so well with each other so it was very devastating for both of us when we had our first serious argument. None of us knew what to do and it was a burden to not to see that person because of a debate. After a couple of days, I have found an empty paper cup which has his hand write on it and he wrote a long nice letter on those cup. That unexpected paper cup broke the ice and I taught that I couldn't be more happier. Those paper cup might seem a worthless trash to others but it seemed like a present to me. Moreover, after many years, I still keep that paper cup and read it time to time. It gives me power and inner peace.
As a conclusion, special objects can be our shields, entertainments and friends. I am one of the lucky people who has a special object. I hope, it wouldn't get lost in time and stay with me forever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...per cups and take a walk. Next, it has became our everyday routine and made us even c...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
.... However, we never kept them. We were get on so well with each other so it was ve...
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Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...r cup broke the ice and I taught that I couldnt be more happier. Those paper cup might ...
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Line 4, column 419, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... the ice and I taught that I couldnt be more happier. Those paper cup might seem a worthless...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...le who has a special object. I hope, it wouldnt get lost in time and stay with me forev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, well, whereas, apart from, of course, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20364334682 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.365512497 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8518518519 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5185185185 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877384224996 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254907194195 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475966525327 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688766937417 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716859162658 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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