Raising a children is not an easy task because, it is hard to teach responsibility since many parents spoil their children from infancy. These spoiled children faces real life harder and that could create problems in their personality and self confidence. Therefore, I agree with the statement of encourage children to take a part time job for their future adult life. My opinion is based on the following reason that explained in this essay.
Initially, teenage is one of the hardest period of our lives since our character start to shape. To built up a good personality, it is vital to have a very strong sense of responsibility. A responsible teen can become a successful adult who has a confidence to do anything she/he can or want. Also, their sense of deliberativeness and susceptibility improves and moreover, they could be aware of the importance of time management. tHese properties can not occur all of a sudden but formed in time instead. In order to put these valuable features to a child, it is very urgent to give responsibility from their young eras. How? By making them to take a part time job.
Encouraging a teen to take a part time job is one of the most significant thing while raising them in order to give them a responsibility. Because, a teen who work a couple hours a day would know to obey some rules namely, being punctual, finish a task in the best way they can and get along well with the others. These rules may seem easy or unnecessary however, these rules are the main factors to form a good personality. A teen who learned to obey rules can fit in any conditions in his/her future life and make the things work for himself/herself. On the other hand, adults who never worked in their teenage eras have obstacles in their business or private life because of themselves.
Furthermore, working teens could taste the sweetness of making their own money. They would now that earning money is not easy so they would start to spend every penny very carefully. Then, parents do not have to be worried about how to teach money management and saving money. Plus, they could be able to buy the things they would like to have by themselves independently. These feelings must be lived by oneself to be able to understand.
In a nutshell, working at a part time job is not only good for make money but also good for bring a teen of strong personality. For this reason, I am on the side of encouraging teens to take a part time job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
Raising a children is not an easy task because, it is hard...
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'face', 'fax'.
Suggestion: face; fax
...en from infancy. These spoiled children faces real life harder and that could create ...
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Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...atement of encourage children to take a part time job for their future adult life. My opi...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: THese
...e of the importance of time management. tHese properties can not occur all of a sudde...
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Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ung eras. How? By making them to take a part time job. Encouraging a teen to take a p...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e job. Encouraging a teen to take a part time job is one of the most significant thin...
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Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...rstand. In a nutshell, working at a part time job is not only good for make money but...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...the side of encouraging teens to take a part time job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62328767123 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77883520667 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495433789954 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4583747211 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0434782609 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0434782609 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330973906804 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981995019054 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11073742242 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192064127565 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932547317771 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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