There are many days in each person's life could be considered as the most outstanding day like marriage day, graduation day, or bearing a baby. But it is certain that there is one day which stuck in his/her mind since the memory of the day had changed many things in that person's life story. I must admit that for me it happened a couple of years ago, in the day, I moved to the USA. I am confident in choosing this day on which the next paragraphs will elaborate.
In the beginning, I am confident to say that day was a juncture in my life due to the leaving the safe-zone and exceeding out of my habitual lifestyle. However, I had made an exact plan either for the certain unexpected situation or for the things which considered as the things which would be under my control, but I had no vision of the upcoming happenings, and it was kind of inexorable and intolerable the days before my flight to the United States of America. Nonetheless, I had a phenomenal dream, and those pessimistic feelings couldn't have kept me away from my ultimate goals which had been visualized before. Hence, I keep alway remembering that weird day, I moved forward to soar achieving and making a magnificent life. However, at the same time, it made me feel dreadful as it seemed like I was destroying my comfort zone. For such extraordinary and turbulent emotions, this day is my first choice.
Additionally, From that day, I turned to a different person versus the past, and I owe all these conversions from my parent's attempts teaching me not give up in tortuous circumstances. Before this tremendous movement, I had not assumed that I was strong like this. But, Fortunately, after immigration, whenever there is an unbearable vicissitude, I can take advantages those precious lessons from my folks and make it in which way I want. Once something awkward shows up, I remember this golden advice, " My beloved one, just keep in your mind, no pain, no gain", my father said at the airport. I am certainly sure that day was an ascension to flowering as an eminent person not only being a professional individual but also as a human. That's why I keep in my mind that turning incidence, which I call the triggering day.
All in all, I am convicted, my flying day to the USA is the most vital day in my life's calendar for the considerable fluctuations which have been engendered in my personality. Finally, I can say everyone has such triggering day which should be appreciated and understood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
There are many days in each persons life could be considered as the most ou...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...the day had changed many things in that persons life story. I must admit that for me it...
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Line 4, column 536, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...l dream, and those pessimistic feelings couldnt have kept me away from my ultimate goal...
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Line 6, column 748, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ssional individual but also as a human. Thats why I keep in my mind that turning inci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66590909091 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85565174712 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529545454545 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7003945284 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.055555556 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132676391239 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495057793596 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034842188793 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937518805011 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285537790764 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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