Do u agree or disagree? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
As the technology grows, the issue of whether the life has got easier than before has recieved a great deal of attention people and psychologists. Although some may argue that people in these century are not feeling comfortable and experiencing lonliness, I as well as many others believe that these days life is more comfortable than previous decades due to the development of technology and change of people’s culture. I am of the opinion that both of the mentioned viewpoints have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspectives.
First and foremost, beyond the shadow of the doubt, technology has a great role in twenty-first century people’s life. Throughout the history, there have been great number of works which should be done hardly by bare hands. By the evolution industry, the technology has been evolved in diverse fields and works which was done by people is now done by technology. The more the technology develop, the more the life got easier. For the purpose of illustration, in this decade people wash their clothes by machin which in the past decades, before the invention of wash machin, grandparents forced to wash the clothes by hands.
Furthermore, it is established beyond the doubt that the culture of people has changed through the time. In these days people get more attention to their comfort and relaxation. They do not asidious activities and take their comfortation as their primary priorities. As a case of point, today people prefer to travel by planes than cars due to the comforty of them.
On the other hand, It is occasionally said that these days life has been more difficult and the comfortation has not prevalent. The psycologies believe that in this machinery world people get apart from each other and they suffer from loneliness more than before. According to the research which cunducted by a japanese institute , from a larg number of people who contributed to this research, most of them found the life more difficult than before due to their loneliness.
In brief, contemplating all aforementioned above, I can draw the conclusion that today life of people has been more easier than before chiefly due to the development of technology and evolution of the culture reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, apart from, in brief, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10610079576 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89509503537 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480106100796 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1513546974 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3125 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205251905144 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773194870847 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608112223136 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128091606739 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209683963199 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.