do u you agree or disagree, people should know about the news even it is unlikely that affect their daily life?
Since the beginning of the last centuries, the world has changed drastically. Some people believe that it is imperative to read about news, even they do not influence their lives; however, there is another substantial body of evidence that casts doubts on this belief. From a personal perspective, the former point of view carries more weight, given that knowing about events that happen all over the world has a positive impact on people's knowledge, decisions, and safety. Below I will strive my supporting points in more detail.
The first and foremost point, given that the transportation revolution, the world has become a global village. Furthermore, countries are interdependence on each other. Even though any event happened in any particular country, other countries could be affected directly or indirectly. A vivid example that can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is, after the last American presidential election, lots of social and political aspects have been changed. Such as the change that happened in the border aspects between Canada and The United States. Business trades and policies are totally different, which influence the economy of both countries. To put it in another way, when any economy changed, not only affects the price of goods; but also, taxes. Therefore, people who aware of the news know that the president has a severe effect on a country's economy, which helps them to take optimal decisions.
Next, coupled with optimal decisions, knowledge is another benefit of reading the news. News not only has political events; but also, has environmental and geological information, which broads understanding and augments knowledge. A recent survey done by The University of Toronto found that people who read news consistently could maximize their knowledge, and enhance their brainstorming; furthermore, reading the news protects people from some mental diseases such as Alzheimer's, and depression. Consequently, reading the news has incredible benefits.
Although the previous reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point that must be born in mind. Provided that people know about the events around the world, they can carefully plan for their trips. From the news, people could know the safety of the place they will visit. In addition to that, knowledge about the prediction of the weather would be a blessing. As a result, information about the news might come with concrete rewards for individuals.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, knowing about events happening around the world has significant benefits, and underestimating the importance of these benefits is not logical. It is suggested that schools teach their students about the vital role of the news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 531, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2389.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32071269488 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81374538815 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56570155902 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5239691766 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.869565217 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5217391304 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236051361875 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625067150134 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611904041501 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135678598623 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324441060859 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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