Do we or don’t we need zoos?
Do we or don’t we need zoos? Personally, I agree with the statement. I
think that we need zoos. We need zoos because they are educational, they
are fun for families and they protect endangered animals.
Zoos are educational. For example, when I was 12, my teacher took us to
the zoo in Berlin. I had never seen wild animals before. I had just read
about them in books and seen them on the TV. But seeing them in real life
was amazing, especially the lions. On TV, they looked so small, but seeing
them alive they were really big. By going to the zoo, I definitely saw things
in a whole new light.
Zoos are also fun for families. For example, I have a family and we always
go to the zoo every summer. My wife makes a picnic and we spend all day
there. My kids love taking pictures and learning all about the animals,
especially the gorillas. Being outside is good for my children. Best of all,
they can leave the internet and the TV at home.
Finally, zoos protect endangered animals. For example, I saw two pandas
in the Washington DC zoo last year and they had a baby. If there were no
zoos, the pandas would disappear because we are taking their land away.
However, in a zoo the pandas are safe. It is not perfect, but without zoos
there might not be any pandas left.
For those reasons, I believe that we need zoos because they are
educational, they are fun for families and they protect endangered animals.
If you want to have fun and learn something new, you should go to a zoo.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.475 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32870014982 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539285714286 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6449462932 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.2083333333 100.406767564 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.53405017921 485% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359720508259 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12340728328 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203766744333 0.0737576698707 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112563993813 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173233135394 0.0645574589148 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 11.7677419355 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.46 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 8.01818996416 75% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.