Do you agree of disagree with the following statement? Face to face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters and email.
Face to face communication has become a problem in today’s society because people rarely talk directly, you will find that some people feel awkward making small talk with strangers, or even talking to their friends in person, although it is the best way to communicate.
Talking face to face such as expressing emotions, is more efficient and has a large meaning and a huge effect when you use the facial expressions and the tone of the voice. Social media has conquered the world to make our life easier but it only made it harder. In fact, face to face talking seems scarier than typing because these days we are accustomed to communicating by texting rather than setting up a meeting, while it is completely wrong because even business is done with a real conversation, let alone the personal matters.
In addition, human beings are created to be connected with each other, but unfortunately after texting has become part of our daily life relationships have been effected the most, because using text messages can lead to communication problems, misunderstandings and issues. Plus, messages are often unemotionally read.
We communicate over emails, calls and messages but nothing can replace the value of talking directly, therefore to develop a business or maintain human connections, face to face communication is required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Face to face communication has become a ...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...ven talking to their friends in person. although it is the best way to communicate. ...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ven talking to their friends in person. although it is the best way to communicate. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h it is the best way to communicate. Talking face to face such as expressing ...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to communicating'.
Suggestion: accustomed to communicating
...r than typing because these days we are accustomed to communicate by texting rather than setting up a mee...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion, let alone the personal matters. In addition, human beings are created to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssages are often unemotionally read. We communicate over emails, calls and me...
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Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'connections'' or 'connection's'?
Suggestion: connections'; connection's
...to develop a business or maintain human connections face to face communication is required....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17511520737 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94683075623 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1988649031 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.375 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281821114448 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101404860103 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869086056216 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167856223928 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635802443442 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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