do you agree or disagree? advertisement is necessary for prosperity of a business.
The question is whether leaders must spend a lot of budget on advertising if they want to be success in their business. Everyone with regard to his private perspective may maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, in recent years, the mentioned suggestion has been challenged. As some believe that only approach for prosperity in business is advertisement while others claim other factors play crucial role in achieving this goal. I strongly affirm the second group's opinion. The next paragraphs will vastly elucidate my vantage point through three noticeable reasons:
To begin with, nobody could overlook the fact that advertising is an undeniable feature in the success of any business; however, one should not forget that it is not the whole of story. Applying a variety of methods such as hiring Buzzers, using costume or standard business cart and creating exaggerated advertising shows and so on can have salient role in attracting people. Relying just on one way can lead companies toward the failure because without having high quality of products, no matter how cost you spend for advertisement; you will fail because nowadays customers can discern the difference between lie and truth.
In addition, one of the most important activities which should be done by bosses is that they would dedicate some budget to support their employees through providing some circumstances for studying them in universities. It goes without saying that through this way, workers would broaden their knowledge base in related to their work; hence, spontaneously the companies' productivity will rise up. Even more, spending money on insuring of labors has constructive consequences. For instance, a firm which has health and pleasure force will make few mistake and extra cost associated with errors will be eliminated.
Moreover, should business companies attempt to send some their workers to foreign countries for learning international marketing, the young agent will gain a wide range of global methods; therefore, the quality of products will be improved and customers will heard about the reputation of such the companies.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that advertisement is a necessary but small part of business. For guaranteeing the prosperity, one should notice other factors such as encouraging workers for going to abroad or university.
- tpo15 80
- tpo42 3
- do you agree or disagree? students should consider studying in fields related to subjects like technology, math, science and so, if even they are more interested in other subjects. 90
- do you agree or disagree?advertising can tell you a lot about a country 80
- do you prefer to give money for which type of activity:providing food and house for poor peoplegiving money to poor people for starting the small businessmedical care 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...this goal. I strongly affirm the second groups opinion. The next paragraphs will vastl...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...to their work; hence, spontaneously the companies productivity will rise up. Even more, s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mistake seems to be countable; consider using: 'few mistakes'.
Suggestion: few mistakes
...has health and pleasure force will make few mistake and extra cost associated with errors w...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hear'
Suggestion: hear
...cts will be improved and customers will heard about the reputation of such the compan...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40214477212 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86294944527 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627345844504 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.276141118 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.928571429 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167214463162 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551703781237 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510931953646 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972182749385 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601224408256 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.