From the begining untill the end, all part of life is beautiful. Some people take a radically different point and adhere idea aduldhood better than chilhood because of money. Some others adheres to the idea that chilhoods is the best. I personally agree with the statement and line below will shad light on my standpoint.
First of all, the foremost reason coming to my mind is that the games. Believe or not games (which we played when we were a child ) play significant role in our lifes. We have plentiy of times to play of the game which makes our life happier. Persons forget to play games as they are becomming an adult. Due to stress of life, people do not find enough time to play the games. Take my own experience, I used to play game until late hour every night, when I was a kid but I am working now and have to sleep early. Hence I can not play it.
Secondly, in addition of significant of playing games, it is remarkable to consider that individuals have less responsibility at childhood times. As people become an adult, their responsibilities also boost. Their to do list increase constantly such as paying bills or house loans or finding better job prospects. Therefore, these may make life more boring. Responbilities makes life more serious. By the way of example, I have to g oto job every day and pay my rent and bills and credit cards loan. I do not have to relax.
Lastly, there are also other advantage of being child such as making mistake, sleeping how much you want, riding bycyle. Chilhood times make life easier. Hence, if I have to a chance I might turn my childhood again.
Taking foremention reasons, it would be concluded that Childhood is the happiest time in a person`s life. People have just one childhood. I think everybody should know its importance. They should play much more games and have much time with their friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifferent point and adhere idea aduldhood better than chilhood because of money. S...
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Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'adhere'.
Suggestion: adhere
... chilhood because of money. Some others adheres to the idea that chilhoods is the best....
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mes which we played when we were a child play significant role in our lifes. We h...
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Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...am working now and have to sleep early. Hence I can not play it. Secondly, in additi...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...loan. I do not have to relax. Lastly, there are also other advantage of being child such as making...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in addition, such as, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6265060241 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57063799606 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599397590361 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6594711783 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.44 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.28 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171202240408 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516012460026 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603518735676 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979705839614 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428927708842 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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