Do you agree or disagree with the following? People will have more leisure time in the future than they do today . Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
Now a days, the world is becoming a fast pace working environment. Daily there are new inventions, new discovery and many new things coming to existence. To be in the league of this constant changing world is one big hell of a task. I personally disagree with the statement that people will have more leisure time in the future than they do today. I feel this way for the two reasons, which I will explain in the subsequent paragraghs.
First of all, the world is now very much competitive than before. As we can witnessed ground breaking discoveries are happening every second. Also technology has advanced so much that any detailed needed is available on the hand by just click of a button. In order to search and bring to the world new things, many geneius mind are working day and night to make it happen. For example: Recently world was hit was covid. So many scientist were working around the clock to save the humanity and bring us vaccines. In matter of few months 2-3 vaccines came into existence. As far as I can remember no vaccine came into existence as quickly as this vaccine came. This is because people worked with all their determination to save the kind rather than spending time in useless things.
Secondly, as the competition has increased, the average grade needed to get into any college has also increased. Earlier people could into their field of choice without any worry and ace in it.Now a days just to get into good college is also a dream. For example: When I was young, I scored 95% in my high school which was well enough to get into medical school at that time. Recently my younger brother got his high school results in which he scored 97%, still he could not get into waiting list also in the medical school. This shows that how much competiative this world has become.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that people will have more leisure time in the future than they today. It is because of technology and competition in this constantly changing world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, the world is becoming a fast pace work...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, the world is becoming a fast pace work...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... now very much competitive than before. As we can witnessed ground breaking discov...
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Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...discoveries are happening every second. Also technology has advanced so much that an...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scientist seems to be countable; consider using: 'many scientists'.
Suggestion: many scientists
...e: Recently world was hit was covid. So many scientist were working around the clock to save t...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
... choice without any worry and ace in it.Now a days just to get into good college is...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... choice without any worry and ace in it.Now a days just to get into good college is also a...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ice without any worry and ace in it.Now a days just to get into good college is also a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63559322034 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45868702387 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.17925713 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168103859064 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060219299072 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152966788116 0.0737576698707 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157697533281 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131824695438 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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