Happiness is an undeniable aspects of peoples’ life. Having relationship with friends could make people happy. Although some people prefer to have relationship with many and new friends, I prefer to have limited but old friends. I think, this way can make me happier. I have some reasons for my opinion, that explain below.
To beginning with, old friends can make familiar with different aspects of each other. They can be like their siblings. Furthermore, because of the long time that they know each other, they can help their friends better than other people. For example, one of my high school class mate and I are friend from 18 years ago until now. Although I do not have any sister, she likes a sister for me. I can tell her all my serious and mysterious problem in my life and she help me honestly. So I believe that old friends have more effective in happiness.
The second reason is, having long relation with old friend cause saving our time. If people try to find new friends forever, should spend many time for recognizing each other so they consume many time in their lives. For example, one of my cousin believed that people should be friend with many persons. Even though when she was 40 years old, she did not have a good friend and she was depressed. It is a desirable she saved an old friend indeed.
To sum up, having relationship with friends is in connection with happiness. In my suggestion, it is better this relation be old and intimate. It can provide a good emotion and prevent time consuming.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and e 60
- The most effective way for the government to conserve energy is to increase the price of the gasoline and electricity 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'aspect'?
Suggestion: aspect
Happiness is an undeniable aspects of peoples' life. Having relations...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...d mysterious problem in my life and she help me honestly. So I believe that old frie...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... find new friends forever, should spend many time for recognizing each other so they cons...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... recognizing each other so they consume many time in their lives. For example, one of my...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'friended'?
Suggestion: friended
...y cousin believed that people should be friend with many persons. Even though when she...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, honestly, if, second, so, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67527675277 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47616598655 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2861180093 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.35 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.55 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227138225006 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788268057426 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612722896392 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152618350091 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348306129648 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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