Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.
Food without doubt has more crucial impacts on people life during history. People always struggle to combine healthy things with each other to enhance the value of their nutritious. Furthermore, they constantly utilize healthful methods of cooking because it is so important to eat safe food. The minimal amount of people do not influence by advertising about unhealthy food but most of them attend to the advertisement. In my opinion, advertisements have major importance in people’s appetites. So, I personally agree with that and I depict my reason around this opinion in the below paragraphs.
The first reason that I would like to say is that most people spend too much time in front of the TV. Therefore, advertisements about fast food or unhealthy food can have extremely influences on them. In addition, Fast food restaurants proliferate rapidly in the world. Moreover, most of them are cheap. So, it is worrying and bad news and it can threaten people’s health. For the first instance, Mac Donald’s restaurants is one of the cheap chain restaurants in the world. These restaurants encourage people to have their meals at low price.
As a second reason to why unhealthy food advertisements have more effects on eating habit is that people think their nutrition is not important enough. Moreover, most of the governments do not have obvious programs to teach people about nutritious foods and it value on their bodies. They prefer t spend more time on another significant issue. For illustration, government of Switzerland decided to enforce the prohibition law that it abolished the unhealthy and fast foods advertisements on TV. in addition, they confined these injurious cheap chain restaurants too.
Finally, according to the research food paly essential roles and people’s health depends on what they prefer to eat. Advertisements have an extremely impact on people and motivate them to choose unhealthy eating habits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'values'?
Suggestion: values
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30225080386 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05068619197 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1237447871 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.45 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181865156822 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596953437977 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580513306811 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1288200164 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461822011347 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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