Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree that all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, university students are busy, but taking history courses if History is not their field of study will take a lot of time. For example, I am a college student studying Computer Science and I sometimes feel that I don't have enough time for my study. To be more specific, there are a lot of assignments about Computer Science-related courses I need to work on and they are too difficult for me to finish in short durations. On the other hand, if I am required to take history courses, I will not have sufficient time to prepare and review the content taught in class.
Secondly, university students are lazy, but taking history courses will need a lot of efforts. For instance, my classmate Ben, who is a student, too, does not want to spend any efforts on things that do not involve him because he love sleeping. He always focuses on what he want to do and what he is responsible for only and go to bed as soon as possible. If he need to take the history courses, he will need to spend a lot of efforts on keeping himself not to sleep early.
Last, university students are poor, but requiring them to take history courses will cost extra money. For example, students in my university need to pay a fee for each credit, and if they have to take an extra courses, they will have to spend more money on that. Some of the students may even need to find a job or to eat less on their meals to afford the mandatory course.
Therefore, I disagree with that all university students should take history courses no matter what their field of study is because students are busy, lazy and poor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ter Science and I sometimes feel that I dont have enough time for my study. To be mo...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
...ings that do not involve him because he love sleeping. He always focuses on what he ...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... sleeping. He always focuses on what he want to do and what he is responsible for on...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... will have to spend more money on that. Some of the students may even need to find a job or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in short, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47663551402 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46377467603 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451713395639 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4213702359 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353449790262 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158603627934 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168573596245 0.0737576698707 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298426349202 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188991933771 0.0645574589148 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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