Today, we have witnessed radical changes in conditions in life in comparison with the life in the past. With the improvement of technology and science most significant problems which humans were faced in the past have been solved properly. The standard of our live is in good an satisfactory condition and personally I am of the opinion than the most important difficulties of humans have been removed due to the improvement of science and technology. I feel this way because of some reasons which I will explore them in the following essay:
The first reason which comes to mind immediately is the improvement of health condition of our life against to the past. Today with the invention of diagnostic tools such as high advanced MRI or X-ray machines most of the disease could be diagnosed in a short time and could be treated too. Moreover, with high efforts of physicians, pharmacists and chemist almost all of the sicknesses have an appropriate medicine and people could live longer than before. For example, with the help of vaccination the percentage of death in the infants is near the zero because most of the newborn babies died in the past due to chicken pox or infantile paralysis.
In addition, when we look at the history we could realize that the transportation or communication were too much difficult. However, with improvement of communication system people are connected easily with each other and they can transmit and broadcast their message in a second via social Medias like whats up or tweeter. Furthermore, transportation improvement has either improved our life quality a lot. We can travel in a short time to ling distances around the world which was a big challenge in the past or we can transfer the cargos very easily which was an unsafe and time consuming process in the past. Hence thanks to these and many other improvements which changed our life styles a lot.
To draw my conclusion, as I mentioned above, most important improvements have taken place in today’s life like health condition, communication and transportation development. Admittedly it is not deniable that still we need more improvement like an appropriate cure for some disease but I hope to achieve them in the near future.
- Nowadays food has become easier to prepare Has this change improved the way people live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
- Nowadays food has become easier to prepare Has this change improved the way people live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
- TPO31Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- TPO 46 Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examp 70
- TPO 32 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ly. The standard of our live is in good an satisfactory condition and personally I...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...sicians, pharmacists and chemist almost all of the sicknesses have an appropriate medicine...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...sage in a second via social Medias like whats up or tweeter. Furthermore, transportat...
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Message: Did you mean 'long'?
Suggestion: long
...a lot. We can travel in a short time to ling distances around the world which was a ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...and time consuming process in the past. Hence thanks to these and many other improvem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, for example, i feel, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98663101604 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93332081681 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8338700466 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.214285714 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256120821711 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942328708803 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669111117682 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16012597407 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498703547897 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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