Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising.
It is axiomatic that business's development in some area such as financial income, competitive advantages, and market shares is highly dependent on business's activities and its strategies around kay factors that could leads to maximum profits. With this in mind allocating financial resources to advertising would be associated with business prosperity.
Firstly, with the help of advertising company could introduce its product especially if the company launch an innovative product. When the company produce a creative goods introducing that product not only could help customer how to use it, but also even to find potential consumer. Take computer as an example, when it was proposed for first time the company try to use all kinds of medias including TV shows, radio, flyers, mailing catalogs etc. to show it works an also how it would make the life more easy. In such cases if the company ignore using advertising, potential customers wont be aware of product, so the company cant sell its products consequently, with no sell the company wont meet its goals.
Secondly, by using advertising businesses could make profit. Some people may think advertising costs are high, but as a matter of fact the whole money that spend will come back. Because when company expose its product on the view of large number of people, most people memories that brand so while they are shopping they will be inclined to buy familiar brands. For example, there is and milk brand in my home town called Mihan, This brand use all type of medias including TV advertising, billboards, social media etc to advertise its product. In such condition, that in every place in town we could see its name or kind of its trace, when I want to buy milk the Mihan word will come to my mind, so spontaneously pick me up to chose the mihan's milk. By generalizing this behavior to the whole community they want milk, we conclude that advertising increases product sales and this sale will lead to more profit and success of the company.
Finally, it seems to me that advertising products wont be a waste of money, in return could leads to business success. It also help businesses not only to introducing a product, but also improve financial resources of company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lead
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'good'?
Suggestion: good
...ct. When the company produce a creative goods introducing that product not only could...
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Suggestion:
...ws, radio, flyers, mailing catalogs etc. to show it works an also how it would ma...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ont be aware of product, so the company cant sell its products consequently, with no...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94429708223 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66727461309 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3233756576 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.266666667 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130739188735 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585958802556 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620775860824 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985714337445 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380134499063 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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