Nowadays, with the prevailing trend of social media and manifold kinds of information channels, more and more companies prefer to spend money on their advertisement, and some of them even believe this is the only way leading to success. However, as far as I am concerned, I hardly concur with this idea, and what I believe can be substantiated as follows.
Admittedly, advertising plays a key role in making profits. With the high-speed development of technology, the masses are paying more and more attention to social media platforms. Whenever people want to search for information about the products that meet their needs, they are enabled to put the keywords into a search engine or social media platforms. The information about the products will appear on the screen within a second, which is convenient as well as time-saving. Provided the companies make some propaganda videos or articles about their products and put them on those channels, they can appeal to more customers owing to the convenience brought by diversified advertising channels.
However, it is also advisable for companies to guarantee the quality of their products if they want to gain profits in a long term. Although advertisements can attract customers in a short time, the only way to turn them into loyal ones is to ensure product quality. Imagine that an influencer introduces a product. At first, customers may be appealed by his words or the eye-catching effects of the advertisement. But after receiving the products, if they find that the quality is below the average, they will no longer believe in those advertisements and even boycott all of the products labeled the brand. Take me as an example. Once I saw an advertisement for a pen. I really fell in love with it at the first glance, and the words the host said in that Ad caught my heart. Nevertheless, after receiving the product, which is of poor quality, I was disappointed and even cast doubt on other products manufactured by that company.
In addition, the organization and management are also of significant importance to the company. In modern society, good human resources can facilitate the development of a company. Only if the company is equipped with some advanced organizational system and management skills, it will obtain more attainments than other rivals. A good example of this point is ByteDance, an Internet giant in China. At first, although the company made a lot of advertisements, it was not able to gain enough profits since the productivity was relatively low and the management methods were outdated. After the revolution in this field, the company adopted a cutting-edge management system that increase the autonomy of employees. Now, every employee is allocated to different groups, but they also can exchange to other departments and groups with ease so as to improve some procedures of the whole production. These changes stimulate employees' participation and efficiency.
In a nutshell, other factors that affect companies should also be taken into consideration. Only in this way, can a firm ensure its long-lasting development and keep profitable in the future.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The ability to write well is more important than that of speaking? 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The reading that students do on their own is as important as or even more important than the reading assigned by their teachers 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the statement People often buy products not because they really need them but because other people have them 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and TV programs made in one s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries 80
- We all occasionally need to follow a procedure that we are unfamiliar with or use a tool such as a computer application that we are not sure how to use Some people believe that you should ask a knowledgeable person for help right away when you do not know 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n those advertisements and even boycott all of the products labeled the brand. Take me as ...
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Line 7, column 837, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... other departments and groups with ease so as to improve some procedures of the whole pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, so, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2640.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15625 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06058613667 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509765625 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 829.8 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1117624943 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100060362038 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026781485079 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294754676206 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584891993885 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331848496464 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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