Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example a play, concert or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.
Upon the question would you like to attend a live performance or watch the same event on television, different people have different opinions based on their emotions. From my point of view, each option has its advantages and disadvantages. But I think the benefits of staying in home and watching programs on television outweigh the advantages of other option. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, if I want to go to a stadium, I should buy expensive tickets. In my opinion, I can use this amount of money for purchasing necessary things such as books, cloths and so forth. Besides, there are usually long lines and I have to wait. In my point of view, waiting in line for buying tickets is a waste of time and it is better to do useful activities like reading or exercising.
In the second place, attending a concert have other problems especially in major cities. For example, I have to drive a car or catch a bus. There are also traffic jams or air and noise pollution in big cities. In contrast, I can watch concert on television while they drink a cup of coffee or tea and without having any problem.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that there will be extra costs, if I want to go to stadium. For instance, I should buy bus ticket or if I want to drive my own car, I have to find a parking lot and pay its cost. In addition, stadiums and concerts are overcrowded and it usually takes time to find a seat.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that it is better to stay at home and watch concerts or sporting events on television based on the reasons which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47727272727 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66778623649 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9284027197 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1875 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 5.45110844103 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160551261697 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443306819339 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438086949428 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829137563217 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418046316846 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.