Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future?
Upon the question Is it better to save your money or enjoy your money, different people have different opinions based on their emotions, educations, cultures and so forth. From my point of view, each option has its unique advantages and disadvantages but I think it is better to enjoy our money when we receive it. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, most people prefer to have a trip and relax after stressful and boring days of university or work. In my opinion, traveling has countless advantages for people. They can visit new places, meet new people, make friends, get valuable experiences and so forth. People can go to the beach or clime a mountain and breathe clean air. These activities have positive influences on their minds and they will be more energetic for future tasks.
In my point of view, we should enjoy our money because we do not know what will happen in the future. We should go to the cinema, park, Movie Theater, concert, etc. I think these useful entertainments will help us obtain more information and broaden our horizons. I find myself more inclined to go to international restaurants like Japanese restaurant and eat new foods such as Sushi. I will enjoy tasty and delicious foods and it is satisfactory for me.
Last but not least, each person has different desires. For instance, one enjoyable thing that I always wanted to try it, is learning a new language especially English and German. I believe that speaking a foreign tongue is really important in this world.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account it can be concluded that we should enjoy our money when we earn it because no one knows what happens in the future. So it is highly recommended to travel, go to cinema and other enjoyable activities based on the reasons which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68432952523 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.514087301 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22784612386 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562073994296 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865264018062 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119210382163 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109574373686 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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