Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's modern world, life has become much more complicated, and it is not as easy as it was in the past. While some believe that people, especially young people, do not need a plan or organization in today's life, I, based on my knowledge and experience, subscribe to the idea that nowadays, young people should have the ability to plan and organize. The reasons why I believe so will be elaborated upon hereunder.
First of all, life is more complicated, and providing basic needs of life becomes more difficult. I mean, in the past people could easily buy a house and start an independent life. Also, they could live with their parents even after getting married because it was not a problem back then. In contrast, nowadays, young people have to save money for many years in order to buy a small apartment. They have to pay a lot of money on a simple marriage ceremony, which in the past was just a feast with some relatives. For instance, when my father was young, my grandfather married him to one of his friends' daughters. He held a small ceremony, and my parents lived in my grandfather's house for a couple of years after marriage. On the other hand, if I want to get married, I should plan for it and save money for at least ten years, in order to have a wedding party and buy a tiny apartment.
Second, people need to have jobs these days, and jobs have become very specialized. If young people want to have a good life, they obviously should have a decent job. Nowadays, attaining a good job requires many efforts. It is not as easy in comparison to the past. For example, in the past, if young people worked with a doctor for several years as an apprentice, they would eventually become a doctor. However, nowadays, young people should have high scores in high school and pass difficult entrance exams just to enter medical school. After many years of hard study and learning in hospitals, they can become a doctor. Concerning this, it is crystal clear that young people should have meticulous plans and reliable organizations to become what they want to be.
In conclusion, With all this taken into account, I strongly believe that young people should plan and organize their life in these modern days. Through planning, they can be expert and successful in their future careers and have a high-quality life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, at least, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65048543689 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54279981483 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490291262136 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2302295785 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2380952381 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38095238095 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254413605812 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077315410839 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057135614587 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171107968601 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196381466107 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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