Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my view, the increasing sophistication of modern life has made the ability of planning extremely essential, especially to youngsters, who were gradually losing control of themselves in the swirl of life. First of all, planning ahead before doing something important may increase the possibility of success. Early researches have shown that about 90% of successful entrepreneurs had their own business plan before they really make their first step. Take Bill Gates as an example, he is a well-known entrepreneur, but he also started from zero. He was prominent and firm. He dropped out of school at quite an early age, but he also has his own summary of experience. He made hundreds and thousands of plans before taking a leap, both on his studies and his work. As a teenager, I also had my own views on this perspective. I created a company called Vowel with my classmates since sixth grade, and we all thought it should be a easy and stable "occupation". Reality proved it wrong, and our company almost went bankrupt. Fortunately, our business plans saved us. Young people adore possessing their wild dreams without thinking. That is what plans help with. Besides companies, planning helps us to show our best performance out. For instance, as an old saying goes, ‘One minute on stage means ten years of practice offstage.' Rehearsal is an indispensable step of a performance. Most politicians take it seriously before making a speech. Rehearsals and plans clearly show the chronological and scientific order of the performance. That helps people deal with accidents and sudden arrangements, as you have already drawn the whole map in your mind. Secondly, plans may turn a complex assignment into achievable ones. This helps prevent unnecessary chaos among partners. Today, youngsters are faced with heavy and even not executable tasks. By arranging smaller ones scientifically in plans facilitates them to better overcome possible difficulties and be more encouraged, as the tasks no longer seem like mountains, but a pile of rocks. The complexity may simply turn into nothing by this method. All in all, in my point of view, though not all young people should accept this method as there is variety, I strongly support this ability of planning to be promoted among youngsters.
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- TPO-50 - Independent Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 670, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...also has his own summary of experience. He made hundreds and thousands of plans be...
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Line 1, column 929, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... grade, and we all thought it should be a easy and stable 'occupation'....
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Line 1, column 989, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wrongs'?
Suggestion: wrongs
...pos;occupation'. Reality proved it wrong, and our company almost went bankrupt. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11733333333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01765354023 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637333333333 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4522692967 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.76 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161271228587 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395486936948 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406380385625 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161271228587 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.