Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people argues that people now a days are more euphoric than a past as the world is transition so rapidly. They cite that there are usually various ways to be more joyful in this contemporary world due to technology advancement and enjoying time by making Tik-tok, hanging out with friends in social media and traveling with them for adventureous. However, I strongly disagree with these people and believe that as a global is changing so drastically, people are more unsatisfied and depressed that people of earlier ages for following two reasons.
To commence, people of modern era are more gloomy due to the fact that burden of people has also proliferate as the global changes. For instance, in this competitive world the people has to compete for their jobs, education and so forth. To balance the life in the pace one have to persistently do hard work, as a result it becomes too burden for them to balance their personal life as well as professional life. Indeed people become prey of unhappiness. It is important for this era to taken a burden in life because without taking the burden of both professional life and personal life people might not accomplished what the so called succeed in this selfishness world. Therefore, with transforming of the world, people are often suffering adversities due to gigantic burden and pressure of work load.
Furthermore, people are affection towards the path of unhappiness with the changing of world because of phony showoff themselves in social media. For example, almost all people are living in virtual world to showoff their wealth, dresses and even what they eat in social media. If they their relatives and friends have more lavish than them they started to solemn and get jealous. In fact, they try to copy them and if unfortunately, they cannot they become depressed and remain unhappy. It is become crucial for people in this modern globalization world to showoff in modern era because people might think that by showing off they get huge praise and ballooning their reputation. Thus, people are run towards the path of hell now a days as the world changes so rapidly.
To sum up, the issue of whether people are jubliant now a days with the global transit or not is complex. Some suggested that people are more happy today because they are more explore to advanced technology than past. Nevertheless, I still contend that people are facing trial and tribulations and remain unhappy due to excessive burden of this competitive world and also because of fake showing off trend in social media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93302540416 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64090158138 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45727482679 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9812662276 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0555555556 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284222356208 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112581087637 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061206998816 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200379908456 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422654182295 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.