For hundreds of years, people have never stopped debating about whether they are more cheerful than people were in the past or not since satisfaction life is always significant. It is established beyond doubt that there are different opinion about that issue. Although it seems plausible at first glimpse that people have more pleasure life than people had in the past, this proposal could not achieve what it promises. I will enlarge on what I mean in this essay.
Above all, nowadays the technology is developing immediately. To be more exact, new electronic devices are invented every day and each of them has its specific features which means people cannot have the last version of devices more than one day or even some hours. This process can make people unsatisfied of their lives. My cousin a compelling example of that. He bought a new smartphone last week, which was supposed to be the last version of smartphone in the world, while Samsung introduced a new smartphone yesterday. As a result, my cousin is bored with that and he is kind of unhappy with his life.
The other reason which deserves some words here is the fact that keeping up with the fast modification which are happening in the world is really hard for some people, especially the older one. In other words, some people cannot go as quickly as technology these days because it is difficult for them to learn how to use new things. I must say that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. My grandfather bought a new BMW last year. However, he used it for the first time last year ago, he cannot use all the option which is available in this car and he often argues that the new world is not a comfortable place for old men.
In conclusion, given the facts that people cannot have the last version of electronic devices even if they spend a considerable amount of money on that since technology are developing very fast and it is hard for some people to accompany this rate of changes. As a result, I personally presume that nowadays people have less enjoyable lives than people had in the past.
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- Grandparents cannot give useful advice to their grandchildren because the world of today and the world of 50 years ago are too different 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- People in communities can make decisions that protect and improve the natural environment Which one of the following three actions is most useful for people to do if they want to help the environment in their local community Explain why 1 Plant trees a 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, so, while, even so, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67741935484 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51829931215 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518817204301 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.716071673 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.352941176 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198012748791 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631890947437 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625183342827 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125943659026 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291736535567 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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