For hundreds of years, people have never stopped debating about the effect of salaries on the quality of works. The salaries of university professors are a crucial and critical subject of our life since it has a profound impact on our future. Regarding this issue, some people believe that professor's salary does not have any effect on the quality of education since they love to work there and the salary is not important for them, while some others disagree. From my point of view, I think the second idea carries more weight and I will enlarge on what I mean in this essay.
Above all, as an old proverb says: "If you want to get tenfold quality of workers, pay them a little more" To be more exact, more money as salary often encourage people to work with more attention which lead to improvement of the quality. Take my supervisor in MS grade, for example. Although he did not try to involve in my project because he was not enthusiastic to help me, as his salary was really low. But when the university decided to pay him more money, he became so active and helped me in any part of my project.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that some professors have to work out of the university to make ends meet. As a result, they are sick to death of working and cannot focus on their university duties. One of my BS university professors is a compelling example of that. He had to work with one company after his university's hours till midnight. Therefore, he was often tired in his first class of the day.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that if universities spend more money on salaries for university professors, they can help the project of their students financially. However, it is not a common thing, some professor do this in some specific project. For instance, my friend had a road project in his MS grade, which needed a considerable amount of money. His supervisor helped him in paying for some bills since he got the best salary in our university.
To sum up, given the fact that more salary often encourages professors to focus on their work and they should not work out of the university, if university pay them more money. In addition, professors can help students financially when they are paid more money. I personally presume that more salary can result in better quality.
- TPO 55 85
- TPO 29 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement To improve the quality of education universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Companies should pay for employees to get a university degree 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When teachers assign projects on which students must work together the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
...ng this issue, some people believe that professors salary does not have any effect on the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62110311751 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52655843363 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494004796163 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1618634636 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.35 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.85 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325540526272 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985915575447 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645312790342 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191434562439 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277909780486 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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