Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to have them care for animals.
Recently, many parents hold the point that taking care of animals is the best way to cultivate their children's responsibility. Although it might be true to some extent, I maintain that this idea is not true, and several reasons bolster my point of view.
To begin off, it is insurmountable to pathogens from animals which may have a negative impact on children’s health. When the child looks after the animals, it is inevitably to have deepened touch with them. However, there must have various pathogens on their bodies. And this many have an extremely bad impact on their body. What’s more, the child doesn’t have adequate ability to fighting the invasion of pathogens. For instance, some influenza A or B viruses are transmitted from animals to humans and cause great harm. Under this circumstance, it is better for the child not to tough with animals.
Next in line, the child may don’t have the ability to balance their study and care for animals. For the child, they must be interested in the animals they take care of. And they give food or wash them wholeheartedly. What's more, they may also miss them constantly when they doing their homework. Take my friend as an example, when he was young, he had a very cute dog and he always played with it. However, because of pay more attention to the animals, his academic performance was influenced. It is certain that children can't balance their life perfectly. Thus, it is not an outstanding idea to cultivate responsibility.
Last but not least, responsibility can also be cultivated by attending volunteer activity. Volunteer activity is an unadulterated and phenomenal chance for children. That is because, in the activity, children can learn how to accomplish the tasks with partners successfully. Simultaneously, they can improve their ability of communicating, which is also significant to cultivate responsibility. For example, there is a study of government in attending volunteer activity and it shows apparently that people can reap communicating and cooperating skills when they join it. Enhance, it is an immense way to cultivate responsibility.
To sum up, there are a lot of drawbacks to caring for animals and there are some other ways to cultivate their responsibility. Thus, it is not the best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to have them care for animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, look, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14322250639 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10385005738 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493606138107 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3965984427 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.44 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.64 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362867509402 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105366637887 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132758845681 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233320589293 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159342942361 0.0645574589148 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.