Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People hold differing opinions on whether they should travel in a group with a guide. Some people believe that people should travel alone since it will provide them enormous flexibility and independence. However, I strongly agree that one should visit a place in a group guided by a tour guide. I feel this way for two reasons which I will address in the following assay.
First of all, visitors will be able to cover all of the lucrative destinations in a particular area whenever guided by a local person. A well organized group with a guide are likely to cover the whole tour destination, whereas a solo traveler can miss many places. Take my experience as an example, my parents recently visited many historical places in Turkey with a travel agency. They were guided by a person and visited different historical places. In addition, they are also visited in a local village where they bought local famous food and traditional clothing. After coming back, they told me about the village and the food. I was astonished because last year I have also visited Turkey alone, but never heard about the village. If I had visited Turkey in a group, I would have also gone to the village.
Secondly, travelling in a group provides us the opportunity to communicate with others and make new friends. For instance, my friend Tom always love travelling and he travelled many countries in a group. In that time he had made many friends who were from different nationalities. I can remember one of them, named Jhon who was from Australia, because he always contacted him through social media. They first meet in Himalayan expedition and over the time became good friend. After a few years, when Tom was trying to go abroad for higher studies, Jhon helped a lot to get admission in a good ranked university of Australia. Thanks to the travelling, which helped my friend to make some good helpful friends.
To sum up, in my opinion, it is far more better to travel in a group with a guide because it assists in visiting all of the places in an area and helps to make new friends who are really helpful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... of all, visitors will be able to cover all of the lucrative destinations in a particular ...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... To sum up, in my opinion, it is far more better to travel in a group with a guide becau...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... a guide because it assists in visiting all of the places in an area and helps to make new...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, i feel, in addition, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69105691057 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59088228778 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2496399979 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.55 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154826997196 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509696694438 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538534867489 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104428645226 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447792979844 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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