Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of traveling with a tour. It is so obvious that although, there are some negative points such as limited privacy I think the benefits of travel in a group led by a tour guide are more.
To me, I choose traveling in the group for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
My primary reason is that on the trip to the new location tourists can enjoy and save their time for several delightful activities instead of finding a way for their distinction. I mean with a tour guide people are more comfortable and seldom spend their time finding restaurants, gas stations or even the best roads to popular sites for tourists. Drawing from my own experience, I remember that last year my family made a decision for traveling to the south parts of my country but that trip was not so enjoyable for them because they didn't know and seen remarkable sites. Also, my father was so tired after driving for a long time and my family was wondered between wide routes. As you can see, existent a tour guide during travel prepare best way for a memorable journey.
Secondly, travel in a group is the best idea for finding new friends. People usually believe that if you want to know somebody better and deeper, it is a helpful approach to experience travel with him or her. I think this claim is so true because on the trip maybe people experience different challenges and problems. You see, people in groups can improve their communication skills and recognize proper people in critical situations during the trip and find them as great friends.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Not only for finding reliable friends and improvement in social communication but also for experience fun travel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...a tour guide are more. To me, I choose traveling in the group for a number of reasons, a...
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Line 4, column 537, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... not so enjoyable for them because they didnt know and seen remarkable sites. Also, m...
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Line 4, column 734, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'prepare the best'.
Suggestion: prepare the best
...ee, existent a tour guide during travel prepare best way for a memorable journey. Secondl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, i mean, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68072289157 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6143537262 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521084337349 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2469418283 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253423725654 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108999008016 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915537349996 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157512765552 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551835005624 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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