Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is an important part of our life because each trip refreshes our mind. A short or long-distance journey, either group or alone has its own implications on our life. I prefer traveling in a group with a tour guide and I have three rationales for holding this opinion which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start, the prime advantage of a tour guide is- our trip has an order and we have fewer responsibilities. In addition, they know the exact haul, restaurants, shopping complexes, hotels, and even the short cuts to the place which we should explore. They will bear all the responsibilities of guiding the group, but we have to pay him a sufficient amount of money. However, I think the money and the time we give to a tour guide is worth. I can illustrate an example from my personal life. A couple of years ago our family along with some of our relatives went see one of the seven wonders of the world- The Taj Mahal. It is situated in Agra, a small district in Punjab, India. We have a tour guide, who is from Agra and he picked us from our hotel. During our haul to see this world wonder, our bus met with an accident and everyone got injured. I can still remember the priceless efforts of our tour guide to save us by rushing to the hospital. He knew hospitals and the localities who helped us from that massive accident. He managed with our belongings and kept us safe in the nearby hospital. Moreover, he solved the case of the accident by talking and dealing with the native language so that we have fewer responsibilities for the case. If I traveled alone, I will not get this much support from anyone and that will be unfortunate. As u can see a guide on a trip is a blessing to every trip.
Next, Usually, a guide will be a localite, who knows the route and historical backgrounds of the site. during our TajMahal trip, he explained the story behind the monument while we were on the bus itself. This made an eagerness to see the world wonder. He added that it is situated in the banks of river Yamuna and this river is considered holy to the Hindu religion. If we took bath there, we will get relief from any diseases. Therefore, he booked tickets for a boat trip and also an entry pass for Taj-Mahal prior. When we reached the entrance gate, we saw a large crowd in front of the gate to book tickets. If our tour guide, didn't tickets we would have loose time there that will be a hindrance for the rest of our trip. He explained every corner of the monument that it was built by the great Mughal Emperor Shajahan for her beloved wife Mumtaz. This was the burial site for the couples and this edifice is made completely in marble with a lot of diamonds and artworks in its walls. The guide taught us the value and history in detail and it was a mesmerizing moment in my life.
Finally, a guide exactly know the food types popular in the region, As a foodie, his valuable recommendations made our trip a chance to taste the diverse food items in the region. A special tea that is served in clay pot was peculiar to that state. We enjoyed that and I thank that guide for his words.
In sum, traveling with a tour guide will always an asset to us in cases of emergencies and proving tons od valuable information of the history and geology of the location we planned to explore. Therefore, I definitely recommend a tour guide for every long journey in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2779.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 630.0 407.700716846 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41111111111 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00997013923 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55021674416 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 212.727598566 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48253968254 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 892.8 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.150750483 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7352941176 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110207257257 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333204411799 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336379264005 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811132387931 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410689150009 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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