Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
question surrounding the whether the best way to travel is in a group led by tour guide or going privately have been ongoing in my family, among my friend and even between an my boy friend. I can remember last time that my boy friend and I decided to plan for a trip for a vacation, he was insisting on joining a tour and I was trying to convincing him to go privately. at the end he kindly accepted my idea to be done, because of the following pinpointed reasons that I explained at once for him:
first and foremost, the important thing that I am looking for in a trip is calmness. I feel much better when I am free and there is no force for doing something. Being part of a group has lots of benefits which nobody can forgo, but the one basic thing is responsibility. you should be on time and obey many other rules. when I go to a trip, I don't want to accept any responsibilities and I need to rest and only enjoy the trip.
Secondly. due to some parts of my characteristic, I need flexibility. when you are traveling on your own, you can change the plan easily, you can stop in a place which you like more for more than expected time which you have planed before and even you can join to the local tours separately. I remember last time that I had a trip to africa and I really wanted to stay in some part of a coastal forest, but our tour leader decided to return us to hotel. May be I have not the opportunity of visiting the South africa once more time, and I feel regret that I could not enjoy enjoy enough.
all in all, I think the answer of this question differs case by case, but because of tiredness of socializing in work days and most of the different part of the modern life, I prefer to travel privately rather than joining a tour and don't deprived myself of freedom during the trip.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20689655172 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49386219728 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520114942529 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1537638568 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15239544219 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453939111445 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484544878861 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080982146823 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032605101254 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.73 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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