Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past, so we need some time to reduce life's stress and recover ourselves. From my point of view, I think we should spend time alone to reduce stress and be relaxed.
To begin with, the sleep is a most important factor for being calm. This is obvious that people need sleep to rest and relax, which is almost impossible when we are in the overcrowded places. Although for sleeping we don't have to be alone, having other people around doesn't let us to relax very well, especially when we are very tired. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a student at university, I had to work hard because of my busy classes and my job, so I felt a lot of pressure on my shoulder. I really needed to be alone to had a good sleep, but I lived in the student dormitory and there were plenty of freshman students that wanted to play games or discuss about their dating life. As a result, I couldn't sleep well and enough so I was completely tired. Hence, Being alone help to have a good sleep that makes our life stress free.
Furthermore, when we are alone, we don't have to argu with others about every single thing. Arguments are stressfull and consume a lot of time and energy. Frankly, living with some friends is awkward because even close friends have a lot of fights about unimportant things. Obviously, having friends around has a lot of advantages for us such as being accepted, support during problems, and also talking about critical situations , but if your friend is not a calm person and he gives his oponion for every thing, this can be very unnoying. My rommate is a nice person and we spend such a good time, but when I am tired and need some space, he couldn't stop talking. Therefore I think about living alone next semester to be relax and releave my stress.
Moreover, living alone has an indirect effect on reducing stress such as focusing on studying and managing time, which is a way to get relax and be calm. Living alone can provide such a quiet place for us to study efficiently. When we get good marks other tasks will seem easy for us, so we do not feel under pressure. Students, who live alone can be successful in both their study and life.
In conclusion, people can have a better quality of life by living alone . Of course, we are a social creatures and we rely to interact with each others, but when we have a lot of difficulties in the specific period of our life, it would be better to live alone .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44155844156 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39393962545 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2566262598 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137872158973 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499122545608 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432021789156 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937687347409 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343779798665 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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