No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of utilizing your own free time alone to achieve needed. If I were forced, I will difinetly select sending my time with other people to decline stress and pressure. It is my firm belief spending time with people who appreciate and love you can make ypu more satisfied for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, everyone has his own circumstances during his day because of either the nature of the work or family problems, so the person needs to talk with others to express his feelings. In other word, as my friend said, the heaven without people cannot live in it. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly infuenced by my own personal experience. Before three years, when I was single, I did not found anyone to speak with to discharge my negative feelings toward the world, but then I meet a girl who helped me a lot to deal with each case facing me in my life. Consequently, because of this women I skipped every terrible problem and I was admired of her character. Eventually, we got married and righ now wea re waiting our first baby. If I had meet this women before, I would have solved many crucial mistakes in my life.
Secondly, people can give you valuable advices to solve any bad situation, so you can easly make sophisticated progress. Drawing fro my own experience. My brother has always endure with anxiety and stress because he is unemployment. He was spending his day on video games and on his phone without making any decent activity. Consequently, he was always pessimistic and he started to make bad actions. Recently, he recognized new friends who stay with him always, these new people have magical power for him by giving him precise advices to find work or spend his time in benefical activites. As a result, my brother before one week found a new job in the same company which his friends work in.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that stay with people can decline stress and give anyone positive power. This is because spnding time with someone how loves you can gives optimistic feelings and pretty friends can give you more advices to deal with any problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean 'for'?
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...ly make sophisticated progress. Drawing fro my own experience. My brother has alway...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'endured'.
Suggestion: endured
...y own experience. My brother has always endure with anxiety and stress because he is u...
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Suggestion: give
...ing time with someone how loves you can gives optimistic feelings and pretty friends ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63567839196 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5095974964 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55527638191 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9653037112 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1052631579 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115360638466 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037516758401 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372261865321 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878074595906 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427324814247 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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