In today’s modern world, with its galloping progress, computers,
tablets, PCs etc., help people to save more time. Although books recall
a good feeling in past years, computers are an innovation for
information era and are available everywhere. I, personally, prefer to
utilize computer instead of books. I explicate my reasons in next
paragraph.
First of all, thanks to the state-of-the-art technology, Researchers,
scientists, students and the other people can research very fast in
technology world. In other hand, wasting time is a fundamental
principle problem for development. Computers give you more time for
searching a lot of things and variety issue. In a recent nationwide
survey, the participants were question about computers technology.
The results indicated that computers help people to accelerate their
information about modern world.
Secondly, in recent time, the people needs a lot of information,
particularly, they cannot carry a lot of books with themselves. Buying
books is very expensive so the people have to go to a library and study
books so it is very difficult to find a suitable reference. Therefore, the
computers saved many books, audio-books, etc. This technology
prevent to cut the trees for making paper. I would like to share my own
experience. When I was student in university for several month, I had
to live in the rain forest which had awesome view for finding a rare
species of trees. I saw beautiful trees, but foresters cut the trees for
paper industry. I think it was huge disaster in Humanity society.
All in all, computers are the best methods for saving time and
protecting environment. The people can find a lot of information about
everything. This technology indicate a new talent and connection
between people in science world.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: books are not needed any more because people can read information on computers. 86
- TPO-43 - Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In today's modern world, with its g...
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Line 23, column 50, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'several months'.
Suggestion: several months
...e. When I was student in university for several month, I had to live in the rain forest whic...
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Line 30, column 29, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'indicates'.
Suggestion: indicates
...tion about everything. This technology indicate a new talent and connection between pe...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40277777778 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04201545438 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3684534578 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.53405017921 595% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153532212555 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424291603952 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535068849763 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0407268372709 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468737776953 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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