Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The significance of dance in a culture, as well as community, has prolonged all over the world as it bears identities and ethnic values of a society. I’m very much devoted to numerous types of dance such as Asian classical dance, African tribal dance, European and American Hip-hop dance and to name a few. Every nation culture or areas hold some distinct types of dance in which they can present their norms and customs. My next sentences will explore the reasons why dance has an important contribution to culture.
First and foremost, a closer look at the Asian classical dances shows that there is a lot of variations of classical dance here among the people. Some dances are performed as spiritual purposes such as Dunchi dance in Hinduism, likewise, Asami Dance, tribal dances, Bengali cultural dances, Srilankan dances have distinctly different motives besides their entertaining practices. Due to the distinctive patterns of these dances, we can identify the names and attributes of culture.
Furthermore, African cultures and tribal people have an abundant source of dance namely san dancing, pat-pat dancing, etc. In the early years, They used to dance for defense purposes. Some specific movements were similar to the pattern of ocean waves, dropping leaves from trees, running of horses. These steps dances embodied ancient African cultures. The engravings of different types of movement on stones are proof of these older dance patterns.
In addition, European culture has also another style of dance, for example, Ballet dance, it was started from France although historians founded the practices of this dance across Europe. Also, New Zealand people sometimes arrange special types of ethnic dances which are very much unique. Also, numerous Caribbean cultures hold some mind-blowing dances.
In conclusion, the aforesaid descriptions illustrate that dance has variations among nations all over the world. African, Asian, American, European and Australian cultures are plentiful with distinctive dancing styles. So, I always believe that dance is very much influential and convey a great role in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, look, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44879518072 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61533735414 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8257281108 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153610449964 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543338397779 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400012385064 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913616620101 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035925072041 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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