Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Do you prefer making new friends or keeping long time friends

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There is no shortage of opinion on how people cho...
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... of opinion on how people choose to keep their friends.Although some people belie...
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...ow people choose to keep their friends.Although some people believe that in an unfamili...
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...elieve that in an unfamiliar environment , making new friends helps to overcome st...
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...ld friends her far away from each other.However, the innovation of modern technology an...
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...iends. I critically agree to keeping old friends for two reasons, which I will ex...
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...om my own experience. I met my long term friend while I was at the university an...
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...rm friend while I was at the university and since then we have been sharing sim...
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...ity and since then we have been sharing similar ideas and thoughts. Although she...
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...of me in school, after the completion of the last sophomore class she got an inte...
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... the largest pharmaceutical companies in my city where she had to display her int...
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... as the most brilliant student in class.She had a very nice relationship with the e...
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...ip with the employees. So when it was my turn to acquire the same skills, she r...
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...was my turn to acquire the same skills, she recommended me to the same compan...
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...y turn to acquire the same skills, she recommended me to the same company. In...
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...quire the same skills, she recommended me to the same company. In addition, I ...
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...he same skills, she recommended me to the same company. In addition, I got the...
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...anks to my old friend who could not just help me with regard to getting an intern...
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...egard to getting an internship placement but also ensuring that I get the skills ...
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...for me to be promoted to the third year.Therefore it is clearly visible to see how keepin...
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...for me to be promoted to the third year.Therefore it is clearly visible to see how keepin...
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... in quandary. Even if someone chooses to remain pessimistic in life, it will defi...
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...ome with the support of being motivated.Old friends definitely motivate and support...
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...nd support one another in any situation.For example, five years ago, I met one of m...
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... she was looking unkempt and disheveled.We exchanged contact and the next day, sh...
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... and disheveled.We exchanged contact and the next day, she called to narrate how ...
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...arrate how she lost her husband and job.While on call with me, she was really crying ...
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...t to worry that everything will be fine.Immediately, i called my husband to narrate her or...
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...hat everything will be fine.Immediately, i called my husband to narrate her ordea...
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...my husband to narrate her ordeal to him.He then told me to get her CV ready which ...
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... then told me to get her CV ready which i did, and forwarded to him.And as a resu...
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...ready which i did, and forwarded to him.And as a result, she got a new job as the m...
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... as the manager of an insurance company.Also, she was able to enrol our children int...
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...enrol our children into the best school.This illustration simply demonstrate how ol...
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...n into the best school.This illustration simply demonstrate how old friends motiv...
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...ends play a vital role towards attaining success in our academic life and as wel...
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... attaining success in our academic life and as well support and motivate us in ...
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...uccess in our academic life and as well support and motivate us in difficult ...
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...ll support and motivate us in difficult
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, third, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81877729258 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93450223119 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543668122271 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.057754299 48.9658058833 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.769230769 100.406767564 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2307692308 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 5.45110844103 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136041901415 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544756527488 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450763252865 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920268421412 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390013734616 0.0645574589148 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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