Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Do you prefer making new friends or keeping long time friends?
There is no shortage of opinion on how people choose to keep their friends.Although some people believe that in an unfamiliar environment , making new friends helps to overcome strangeness while old friends her far away from each other.However, the innovation of modern technology and communication has made us no longer distance from old friends. I critically agree to keeping old friends for two reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
First and foremost, the relationship with older friends is deep such that they assist one another towards academic feats. Drawing from my own experience. I met my long term friend while I was at the university and since then we have been sharing similar ideas and thoughts. Although she was a year ahead of me in school, after the completion of the last sophomore class she got an internship offer with one of the largest pharmaceutical companies in my city where she had to display her intelligence as the most brilliant student in class.She had a very nice relationship with the employees. So when it was my turn to acquire the same skills, she recommended me to the same company. In addition, I got the best knowledge as an intern among my peers. Thanks to my old friend who could not just help me with regard to getting an internship placement but also ensuring that I get the skills needed for me to be promoted to the third year.Therefore it is clearly visible to see how keeping old friends helps towards academic success.
Furthermore, life is a complex phenomenon that could result in quandary. Even if someone chooses to remain pessimistic in life, it will definitely come with the support of being motivated.Old friends definitely motivate and support one another in any situation.For example, five years ago, I met one of my childhood friends at a mini mall in my area. Setting my eyes on her was really jawbreaking because she was looking unkempt and disheveled.We exchanged contact and the next day, she called to narrate how she lost her husband and job.While on call with me, she was really crying and i had to calm her not to worry that everything will be fine.Immediately, i called my husband to narrate her ordeal to him.He then told me to get her CV ready which i did, and forwarded to him.And as a result, she got a new job as the manager of an insurance company.Also, she was able to enrol our children into the best school.This illustration simply demonstrate how old friends motivate and support each other.
To this end, I definitely assert that old friends play a vital role towards attaining success in our academic life and as well support and motivate us in difficult
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, third, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81877729258 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93450223119 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543668122271 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.057754299 48.9658058833 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.769230769 100.406767564 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2307692308 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 5.45110844103 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136041901415 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544756527488 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450763252865 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920268421412 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390013734616 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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